Some people believe that the whole family (grandparents,uncles,aunts) bringing up children is better rather than only parents. What is your opinion?

Some

people

are of the opinion that, it is rather beneficial to a

child

to be raised by both parents and their extended family members. In my opinion, I think that

this

is very important to a

child

's upbringing and it can influence

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positively.

Firstly

,

people

seem to think that the responsibility of raising a

child

not only fall on the parents but

also

on their extended family. The training of a

child

is an important responsibility,

therefore

, getting help with

this

task is necessary.

For example

, a

child

trained by their whole family, become

well rounded

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individuals because they are loved and cared for by many

people

,

also

, they are disciplined and supported by the same group.

For instance

, in the past, numerous celebrities have

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attributed

their achievements to the help, care and discipline they learnt from their families .

Furthermore

, children trained by a village,

in other words

, their parents and extended families tend to know how to communicate better.

This

is because throughout their lives they have learnt to deal with different characters of

people

while understanding their place in the family.

For instance

, children raised in

such

household

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exhibits great communication skills and

also

adaptability skills. Another point to consider is that they tend to be wiser regardless of their age because of the wealth of knowledge available to them . In conclusion, children raised by their families have an edge in everything because they have the support and encouragement from all members

therefore

they grow into good citizens. In my opinion, the benefits of a village raising a

child

supersedes the negatives.