are of the opinion that, it is rather beneficial to a
to be raised by both parents and their extended family members. In my opinion, I think that
is very important to a
's upbringing and it can influence
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seem to think that the responsibility of raising a
not only fall on the parents but
on their extended family. The training of a
is an important responsibility,
, getting help with
task is necessary.
trained by their whole family, become
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individuals because they are loved and cared for by many
, they are disciplined and supported by the same group.
, in the past, numerous celebrities have
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their achievements to the help, care and discipline they learnt from their families .
, children trained by a village,
in other words
, their parents and extended families tend to know how to communicate better.
is because throughout their lives they have learnt to deal with different characters of
while understanding their place in the family.
, children raised in
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exhibits great communication skills and
adaptability skills. Another point to consider is that they tend to be wiser regardless of their age because of the wealth of knowledge available to them .
In conclusion, children raised by their families have an edge in everything because they have the support and encouragement from all members
they grow into good citizens. In my opinion, the benefits of a village raising a
supersedes the negatives.