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Some people believe that the whole family (grandparents,uncles,aunts) bringing up children is better rather than only parents. What is your opinion?

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Some
people
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 are of the opinion that, it is rather beneficial to a
child
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 to be raised by both parents and their extended family members. In my opinion, I think that
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 is very important to a
child
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's upbringing and it can influence
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 positively.
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,
people
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 seem to think that the responsibility of raising a
child
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 not only fall on the parents but
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 on their extended family. The training of a
child
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 is an important responsibility,
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, getting help with
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 task is necessary.
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, a
child
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 trained by their whole family, become
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 individuals because they are loved and cared for by many
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,
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, they are disciplined and supported by the same group.
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, in the past, numerous celebrities have
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attributed
 their achievements to the help, care and discipline they learnt from their families .
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, children trained by a village,
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, their parents and extended families tend to know how to communicate better.
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 is because throughout their lives they have learnt to deal with different characters of
people
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 while understanding their place in the family.
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, children raised in
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household
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a household
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 exhibits great communication skills and
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 adaptability skills. Another point to consider is that they tend to be wiser regardless of their age because of the wealth of knowledge available to them . In conclusion, children raised by their families have an edge in everything because they have the support and encouragement from all members
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 they grow into good citizens. In my opinion, the benefits of a village raising a
child
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 supersedes the negatives.
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