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evey year several languages die out .some people thik that it is not important because life will be easier it there are fewer languages in the world to what extent do you are or arguments with opinions?

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it is irrefutable that ,each year more than more language dies out fear .
individuals
 are believed that it is not significant .a certain segments of society believe that ,old
individuals
 believe serval
languages
 .a group of
individuals
 believe that the extinction of some
languages
 is not a crucial problem since communication will more effective with fewer
languages
 in nation .I would like to delve into both views before forming on opinion. to being with .no doubt, there are
ofhundreds
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hundreds
languages
 in our they
world
 various
languages
 if
individuals
 are not spoken in the nation.since, it is not the biggest problem .it is believed that the disappearance was due to the globalization and the westernisation of the European and American, which have forced people to communicate in international
languages
such
 as, English, France and German or other
languages
 ,
however
, it is the dominant language of technology ,science and international business .
therefore
 ,they would not a significant impact the
world
 . on the other side, the uncomfortable number of
languages
 that have extended show that uniqueness of our
world
 and culture while, if one language is dominant other
languages
 may disappear around the
world
although
,other culture may be damaged .it would have no nationally or culture attached to it .
moreover
 ,
this
 could help to promote international peace and understanding .they environment would
also
 be lost it. in conclusion, I personally believe that with only serval
languages
 that exist in the would life will be easier .I believe that the variety of
languages
 .
however
, certain
languages
 resemble historical values and should be given importance.
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