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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara dessert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

#tourists #places #conditions #sahara #dessert #antartic #visit
The world is an amazing place to explore
however
 some locations might be harder to visit than
other
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.
Nowaday
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 the trend to travel to
destination
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a destination
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such
 as deserts
for example
 is becoming more and more popular.
This
 essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of travelling to
such
a remote areas
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remote areas
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..
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 While travelling is often a fun
things
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 to do, visiting country and places where
conditions
 are extreme could be dangerous.
Becouse
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Because
 of the lack of people living in
the
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apply
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Antartica
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Antarctica
Antarctic
for example
 the risk of not receiving help during an accident is much higher than living in a
high density
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 population area. The research conducted by
the
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Oxford
university
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 in
the
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1996 stated that the vast majority of deaths in
the
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Antartica
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Antarctica
Antarctic
 could have been avoided if the person travelled in groups. In the Sahara
desert
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,desert
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 weather
conditions
 could
also
 be
synonym
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 of danger. The desert is well known for its ability to rapidly change its
conditions
.
This
 is
becouse
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because
 of the strong hot winds that
blows
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 in the area Despite the
conditions
, travelling to places
such
 as deserts or
Antartica
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Antarctica
 indeed have many advantages. People travelling to
the
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Antartica
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Antarctica
Antarctic
 have the uniqueness of seeing the Aurora Boreale
for example
. The Sahara desert as
a
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wildlife
uncomparable
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incomparable
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 to any other place in the world. In conclusion,
ther
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there
the
 are many benefits and a few disadvantages when it comes to hard
conditions
 places. People
sould
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should
could
 always plan and prepare well their own trip and always know their limits.
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