Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara dessert or the Antartic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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The world is an amazing place to explore

however

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some locations might be harder to visit than

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the trend to travel to

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such

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as deserts

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is becoming more and more popular.

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essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of travelling to

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a remote areas

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to do, visiting country and places where

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are extreme could be dangerous.

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the risk of not receiving help during an accident is much higher than living in a

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population area. The research conducted by

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1996 stated that the vast majority of deaths in

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Antartica

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Antarctica

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could have been avoided if the person travelled in groups. In the Sahara

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weather

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of danger. The desert is well known for its ability to rapidly change its

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in the area Despite the

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, travelling to places

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indeed have many advantages. People travelling to

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have the uniqueness of seeing the Aurora Boreale

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wildlife

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to any other place in the world. In conclusion,

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there

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are many benefits and a few disadvantages when it comes to hard

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places. People

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should

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always plan and prepare well their own trip and always know their limits.

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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