Q. Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Different
languages
which
has
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been used in our life die out every year. Some
people
believe that even if there are
small
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number of
languages
exist in the world, life would be easier. I
also
agree that
extinction
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of
languages
does not affect
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humans.
Although
every state has
their
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own
language
to communicate
each
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other,
people
focus on an international
language
to develop global networking-called Globalization.
For example
, English has become a popular
languages
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language
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all over the earth for making contact with other nations.
In contrast
, using several
speech
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among the different countries, making communication would be uncomfortable due to fewer knowledge of other states’
languages
. So, I think
people
are more comfortable
to use
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a unique one for communicating with the
people
of other nations. Learning various
languages
for a person is
difficult
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and
time consuming
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task. For
this
reason, one should learn a common speech
which
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is worldwide acceptable.
For instance
, different states of India has
an individual
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an individual language
individual languages
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languages
, but
Indian
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government declared that as the official purposes everyone must
be follow
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follow
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English
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the English
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Language
.
Therefore
, every school’s authorities design their curriculum with compulsory English
Language
.
On the other hand
, China only
concentrate
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on their own mother tongue resulting in chines are not able to make contact with
other person
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another person
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who
live
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in another country.
That is
why
,
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I believe that die out of some
languages
is not necessary because
of
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life simpler using fewer
languages
in the world. In conclusion, in
this
globalization era, everybody should focus on a unique
language
to make global networking. Dying out of some
languages
does not make any harm in the world.
Submitted by m.hpl on

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