1. Many people believe that the internet has a bigger impact on people’s lives because it is more popular than television. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support you position.

In recent times, the

internet

has become a trend. Many

people

seem to think that the

internet

has made

major

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impact on their

lives

because it has become more popular than

the

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television

. I strongly agree with

this

statement because

,

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I personally have benefited positively from the impact of the

internet

in my daily life.

Firstly

, the use of technology has become very popular amongst

people

,

hence

, the

internet

has become very useful in our daily

lives

because we have been able to access all kinds of information online and

also

make important transactions that

has

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improved the

lives

of

people

.

For example

, in the past, if you wanted to make a reservation for hotel, flights, vacation packages, you had to either make the booking through an agent or visit the booking offices. These days , the

internet

has made everything easier, at the touch of a button, you are given the opportunity to pick what you want and

then

proceed to make payments as you wish.

In other words

, many

people

have become dependent on the use of the

internet

to make important decisions in their

lives

.

Furthermore

, the

internet

has provided the opportunity for individuals to earn money.

For instance

, these days, online jobs have become trendy, it has piqued

people

's interest

therefore

, many

people

apply for these jobs and are given the option of working from home.

Also

,

the

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television

has lost its importance in

people

's life because with the advancement of technology,

person's

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people

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can now afford

smart phones

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smartphones

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.

Hence

, they can view the

news

and other important

happeneings

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happenings

in

real time

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rather than, wait on the

news

to be read on the

television

. The

internet

has given the public access to all sorts of

news

and information

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In fact

, most

news

agencies now have their applications on mobile devices because they recognize that, they can not compete with the

internet

. In conclusion, the

internet

has become very popular and has replaced

the

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television

because

,

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people

can now view whatever programme

that

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interests them on the go. In my opinion, the

internet

has made our daily

lives

easier and more approachable.