Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Mr. Smith I hope
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letter finds you well. I am writing in response to your complaint, in order to express my sincere apologies for any inconvenience. A few days ago, I realized that there was a leaking from the kitchen sink. So I consulted an expert and some workers started changing all the old pipes. I hope
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situation did not cause you too much problem. The contractor estimated approximately 5 days of work, and unfortunately, workers are using some drills and mechanic equipment that make a loud noise. So I am extremely sorry for
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disturbing circumstance. In
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regard, I will make sure
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renovation work will be completed in 2 days with minimum noise pollution.
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, I will request the workers to proceed with their duties during the daytime so as to reduce disturbance in the evenings. Once again, I would like to apologize for the whole thing and thank you for your patience and understanding. Yours sincerely Tom Hall

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coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking your apology and the actions you plan to take into separate paragraphs for even better clarity.
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It would be beneficial to reaffirm your understanding of their inconvenience. Adding a line about how you value your neighborly relationship could enhance the tone.
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Your letter has a warm and apologetic tone, which is appropriate for the situation.
coherence and cohesion
The explanation of the noise is clear and concise, effectively linking it to the renovation work.
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