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The homelessness is a major problem in several countries. What are the major causes and its effects on society?

#homelessness #countries #effects #society
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IN MODERN TIMES, THE ISSUE OF THE STATE HAVING NO
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 HAS BECOME HIGHLY CONTROVERSIAL. THE CAUSE OF
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 PHENOMENON ARE VARIED AND HAVE LED TO A WIDE RANGE OF EFFECTS ON HUMAN LIFE. I WILL OUTLINE IN
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 ESSAY WHY HOMELESSNESS IS OCCURRING, AND DISCUSS THE IMPACT IT CAN HAVE ON WORLD. GENERALLY SPEAKING, THERE ARE TWO MAIN REASONS WHY THERE ARE NOT ENOUGH BUILDINGS FOR HUMAN BEINGS. IT IS A WELL-KNOWN FACT THAT EARTHQUAKE SHOULD AFFECT TO
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 SITUATION IMPORTANTLY.
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 IS DUE TO EARTHQUAKE NON-RESİSTANT BUILDING HAVE BEEN CONSTRUCTED FROM FIRMS. THE RESULT OF EARTHQUAKE NON-RESİSTANT BUILDING İS THAT STATE HAVING NO HOUSE SHOULD INCREASE AROUND TH WORLD, WHICH IN TURN LEADS TO ECONOMIC PROBLEMS AND LOSE OF LIFE. THERE ARE TWO MAIN CONSEQUENCES OF THE ENOUGH NOT HAVING
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 OF the public. PERHAPS THE MOST SERIOUS CONSEQUENCE IS THAT PERSON HAVİNG TO LIVE OUTSIDE BECAUSE OF HOMELESSNESS SHOULD AFFECT FROM COLD AIR , ESPECIALLY IN THE WINTER SEASONS.
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, AILMENTS ACCORDING AS
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 CASE SHOULD BE RISE. A
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 CONSEQUENCE IS THAT HUMAN BEING NO HAVING A
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 TO LIVE SHOULD BE HARMFUL TO the public .
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, WHEN A HOMELESS PERSON LIVE OUTSIDE, CHILDREN CAN NOT PLAY SAFETY NEIGHBORHOOD. IN CONCLUSION, CASE OF NO HAVING
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 IS A TOPIC WHICH IS VERY RELEVANT TO MODERN public. IN MY OPINION , IF GOVERNMENT SHOULD BUILD MORE AND MORE STRUCTURE, AFTER THAN , THEY SELL CHEAPLY TO SOCIETY,
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 CASE SHOULD DECREASE
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 YEARS GRADUALLY.
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