Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that

government

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the government

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should allocate some portion of its budget to enhance

sports

facilities

. Many believe that the regime should finance more capital for top athletes.

However

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others think that the money should be utilized for

sports

facilities

for the population.

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essay will discuss both sides of the arguments and supports the latter

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. On the one hand, athletes are the pride of a country.

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is because they represent the nation

accross

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across

the globe on various platforms.

Sports

-persons do

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intense

hardwork

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hard work

and require special

facilities

to perform their routine practice.

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, their needs are different from the normal public who plays only to

strech

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stretch

their body and keep themselves fit & healthy.

Therefore

, the ministry should invest more

for

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national level

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national-level

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sports persons

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sportspersons

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.

For example

, developed countries like

Austrailia

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Australia

and

USA

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the USA

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,

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allocates

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a specific budget for their stadiums and other infrastructure related to games.

That is

why

there

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players are always on top in

world wide

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worldwide

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rankings.

On the other hand

, many do believe that the cabinet should finance

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such

facilities

for commoners.

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reason for

that is

the populace pays

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considerable taxes to the regime.

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, they are entitled to expect that

thsese

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these

funds should be

utilzed

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utilized

for their betterment.

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, in a country like India,

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very limited frolic services are

availbale

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available

to the populace while for players much more

conviniences

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conveniences

convenience

are available due to the commercialism of the games.

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, individuals should

also

ber

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treated in

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same way as frolic

convinience

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convenience

should be available for every citizen. To conclude, of course, there is some truth in the argument that

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governments should spend more money on

sports

facilities

for top athletes but in my opinion, the cabinet's should fund more capital for the

ordinar

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ordinary

people so that they can

also

get benefited out of it.