Some believe that the Olympic games help bring people from different nations together, while others claim that holding the Olympics wastes money which could be used for important issues. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

There are many who claim that holding the

Olympic

games

brings

variety

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of country's together while others think that it is a waste of financial resources which can

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in more pressing issues. I strongly believe that

Olympic

is an event that helps to bring nations together for

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one common goal. The game has brought about the best in most of the

countries

while putting a pause to

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differences

among them.

To begin

with, it gives a common platform to all sportsmen irrespective of their colour, race, gender to come together and compete to achieve the

heighest

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highest

achievement any athlete can achieve in their life.

In addition

to

this

, all athletes around the world

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an opportunity to share their culture, experience and improve

camraderie

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camaraderie

. As an example, nations like China, Russia and the United State of America who

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in

real time

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war ready

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countries

put aside

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differances

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differences

and compete in the name of

sportsmenship

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sportsmanship

which increase the understanding among them.

Finally

, holding the

Olympic

games

will help not only the athletes who are competing but

also

the whole world to understand

differant

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different

cultures and people around us

On the other

hand

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holding

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Olympic games

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Olympic

games

require

substantial

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amount of investment from

countries

.

Firstly

, the holding country will have to either upgrade the existing infrastructure or build them from scratch to meet the required standards which will put some of the

countries

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a spot of bother,

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in terms

of the financial capability. As an example, Brazil went

bankrupcy

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bankruptcy

bankrupt

after obtaining loans from

differant

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different

institutes to build

there

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stadiums which

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only used for the

games

.

Furthermore

,

countries

can go

in to

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debt traps by

such

actions simply because the governments only

thinks

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of the publicity and the image they could get by holding

such

event

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In conclusion,

eventhough

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even though

there are only financial concerns which

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arising from holding an event

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this

magnitude,

countries

should get together and support the holding

countries

to meet the requirements so that the huge amounts of benefits can be reaped effectively for the host country and the world.