The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?

It is rightly said that "art speaks when words exhaust".
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for people to discuss, whether
arts
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existance
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existence
in the contemporary world and should it be a
part
of
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curriculum.
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the facts that art does exist in
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world and should be an integral
part
of
school
studies.
To begin
with, we can consider events that are taking place in many villages and cities relating to music, drama etc.
Firstly
, they are organised by many huge multinational companies or they sponsor them as they understand the significance of these subjects.
Secondly
, people are aware of the fact that human society cannot be deprived of these essential elements, which plays
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vital role in our life.
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, in the recent news, an article revealed about
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giant
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, who have decided to invest their
part
of the earnings to promote these disciplines.
Additionally
, many institutes are nowadays emphasising
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different forms of
arts
. Some schools at
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and secondary level have made it mandatory for the
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to learn
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of these subjects. Undoubtedly, pupils will learn about different forms of
arts
. Evidently, it will result in their holistic development.
Further
, when they participate in events relating to performing
arts
, their confidence and personality
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remarkable achievement.
For example
, a
school
magazine has revealed many cases, where students who were introvert and sigh, have shown excellent progress. To summarise, I strongly believe that different forms of performing
arts
will always be an essential
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civilization which is inevitable. Not only these,
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be
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thought
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to the
school
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right from
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age to maintain its importance and keep it alive.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aesthetics
  • Cultural heritage
  • Empathy
  • Creativity
  • Expression
  • Innovation
  • Intellectual stimulation
  • Empathy
  • Fine motor skills
  • Well-rounded education
  • Accessibility
  • Preservation
  • Screen-centered
  • Storytelling
  • Balance
  • Artistic mediums
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