The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?

It is rightly said that "art speaks when words exhaust".

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topic is always in

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for people to discuss, whether

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existance

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existence

in the contemporary world and should it be a

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curriculum.

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essay will enunciate

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the facts that art does exist in

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world and should be an integral

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of

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studies.

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with, we can consider events that are taking place in many villages and cities relating to music, drama etc.

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, they are organised by many huge multinational companies or they sponsor them as they understand the significance of these subjects.

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, people are aware of the fact that human society cannot be deprived of these essential elements, which plays

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vital role in our life.

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, in the recent news, an article revealed about

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giant

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, who have decided to invest their

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of the earnings to promote these disciplines.

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, many institutes are nowadays emphasising

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different forms of

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. Some schools at

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and secondary level have made it mandatory for the

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to learn

basics

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of these subjects. Undoubtedly, pupils will learn about different forms of

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. Evidently, it will result in their holistic development.

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, when they participate in events relating to performing

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, their confidence and personality

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remarkable achievement.

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, a

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magazine has revealed many cases, where students who were introvert and sigh, have shown excellent progress. To summarise, I strongly believe that different forms of performing

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will always be an essential

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part

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civilization which is inevitable. Not only these,

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be

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to the

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right from

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age to maintain its importance and keep it alive.