Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Back in October 2019, I along with my two classmates arranged a
community
welfare workshop cum awareness session for middle school students. It was a one-day event. There were more than ninety attendees and we explained to them the importance of
community
welfare activities. Being a part of a rural
community
, many people face different problems in their surroundings so we explained to them the different ways in which they can help their communities
such
as keeping water taps off while brushing teeth, keeping streets clean, helping friends in need by sharing clothes, etc. It was an interactive session full of fun and knowledge. In the
last
, we
also
performed
few
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activities for students and distributed gifts among them to encourage them for good deeds. It was a tremendous experience because we got the chance to impact the most sensitive minds of society. We
also
became successful to bring those beautiful minds towards the path of betterment. It not only contributed to the growth of the
community
but
also
towards the development of an organizing team. The session was arranged in a junior school
hence
it gave me
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to extend my professional network. Along with that, I learned the various types of
communication
. One of them was with the school authority, which falls under formal
communication
. Another was persuasive
communication
; I prepared creative content to draw the attention of children toward
this
highly important subject.
In addition
to
communication
skills and networking, it gave me a sense of achievement as well.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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