Many people believe that social networking sites ( such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

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social networking play's a very important role in human tendency here the topic is about asking if
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the negative impact on both individual and society. I agree, as
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students from a very small age started using social media from which the concentration of a student is involving more on Facebook,Instagram rather than on being books, reading,sports earlier children use to go out play with the friends from which the stamina of children was great and they feel healthy but now as they always want to be on
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,pc,tab the eyes of them gets in trouble due to the
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impact of social networking there are always
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just to get popular and get some attention which is wrong in my sense. So here the answer to it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • erosion
  • face-to-face
  • interactions
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • misinformation
  • polarize
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • procrastination
  • productivity
  • social isolation
  • dissemination
  • breeding ground
  • vast amounts
  • personal information
  • mental health
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