Some people claim that e books and modern media would fully overtake conventional newspapers and magazines. Do you agree or disagree?

In
this
era of technology,
people
prefer
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books
and modern
media
for getting
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.
The modern
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media
has its own benefits. I , personally agree with
this
statement.
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and foremost reason to support my ideology is that
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books
and modern
media
serve qualitative
news
and information.
Moreover
,
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books
has
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audio and video options so
people
can watch
anytime
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and anyplace.
Firstly
, due to hectic schedule
mostly
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most
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people
watch during travelling so
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the
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time
. There are many reasons why
people
avoid traditional
news paper
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On the other hand
, in
this
era of globalisation and easy internet accessibility
news
spread in
short
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time
. The most ideal reason is that
e
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books
and
advantages
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the advantages
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of saving the
news
,
people
can share the
news
on tip of the finger . The latest
news
can be read in
short
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a short
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time
.other argue that it is easy to operate and less
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. Today every newspaper authorities
has
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its own mobile application
On the other hand
, some
people
claim that
e book
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ebook
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and modern
media
lead to vision problems in future.
Furthermore
, as per ICH guidelines In 2015 , one lac five hundred case were registered due to reading
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mobile and laptop .
In addition
, many
people
argue that in
this
age of modern
time
every person should cope up with technology and keep updates their selves. We can say that
e book
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and modern
media
will make
world
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the world
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into
global
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a global
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village. To conclude, owing to
such
reason
people
prefer
e book
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ebook
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and modern
media
but there is still
presence
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the presence
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of traditional
news paper
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in some home.
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