Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, extreme

sports

have become popular around the world. Some

people

argue that these

sports

should be prohibited for their hazard consequences on the individual and

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society. I completely disagree with

this

argument and I believe that governments should support youngsters to enjoy these exercises. In

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essay, I will discuss my point of view thoroughly. Extreme

sports

are not as dangerous as many

people

think. All

sports

involve some element of risk, and there should be regulations to protect participants from possible accidents.

People

who take part in these activities are usually required to undergo appropriate training so that the dangers are minimized. In Dubai,

for instance

, anyone who wants to try skydiving should sign up for lessons with a registered club, and beginners are not allowed to dive solo; they must be accompanied by an expert. The high safety measures taken by sponsors of these

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events make them safer than many risks one could encounter in his or her daily life. These

sports

,

therefore

, are constantly improving in their safety measures and used technology to protect the individuals as well as the expensive equipment.

Consequently

, banning these

sports

is unjustified because their advantages outweigh the possible disadvantages. Since modern life has become brutal and humans struggle daily to secure a humane life because of the financial and social burdens, these

sports

could be the solution for the human stress issue. Skiing,

for example

, can be an

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and relieve

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stress for many

people

who feel restricted by their daily chores.

Moreover

,

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this

type of risky actions not only pleases the participant but

also

brings high income for many developing countries. Many

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poor cities could benefit from allowing tourists to wave surf or to parachute off a mountain to earn money for their national support.

In other words

, these

sports

are beneficial and should be encouraged rather than prohibited. In conclusion, in my opinion, extreme

sports

are safe and beneficial for individuals as well as societies.

Thus

, governments should offer supportive laws and safety precautions to protect and encourage participants to experience these activities.