Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about training or
education
format and its related outcome. whether online
education
or classroom training is better for both
students
and educators caused a hot debate. I agree with the view that online
education
can benefit us greatly. On the one hand, e-learning requires nothing but Internet access a laptop, attendees are able to join class anytime anywhere which are offering
students
a flexible time schedule to pick the right time to learn.
Moreover
, online diplomas are generally less expensive compared to traditional classroom kind.
This
might ease the financial burdens for the families as well as the
students
who are drowning in student loan which might help trainees to study in a less stressful mindset. It's obvious that they are numeric new
education
technology generated by
this
trend which is innovative that might enhance both teaching approach and helping
students
to achieve a better goal. Take learning analysis as an example,the ultimate goal for
this
discipline is to help learners to achieve the target in an effective method and remind the trainers on the weak spot of learners
hence
generating the questions or contents relatively.
This
methodology can be applied not only to online learning but
also
offline. In
this
perspective
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I agree that online learning is a plus at present
On the other hand
, I do understand that professors will need more time on preparing the content and coping with the new platform which might be frustrated for now.
Furthermore
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they are doubts about training outcomes. it seems like most people feel a lack of interaction with classmates, difficulties in accessing lecturers which might weaken the learning process and impact the final result.
Hence
lost their face on the
education
quality. Once the doubts are generated, the University might force to invest in the online platform to ensure the functions are able to cover most of the training sceneries.
However
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with a limited
budget
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it's difficult for them to continue support other ongoing research which will cause negative effects on schools and their scholars . In sum,my view is that online training will benefit us in the long run.
Meanwhile
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universities should leverage the pros and cons and fund online
education
. By doing so we can make sure that we can have our higher
education
at a lower price without damaging the training qualities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unparalleled flexibility
  • democratizes education
  • geographically isolated
  • personal circumstances
  • cost-effectiveness
  • accommodation
  • commuting
  • self-motivated learning
  • self-discipline
  • time management
  • direct interaction
  • feelings of isolation
  • quality and recognition
  • inferior
  • technical issues
  • digital divide
  • reliable technology
  • underprivileged
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