You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Martin, Hope you are in the pink of your health. I am writing

this

letter to apprise you, that I have shifted to a new home

last

week. I had to take

this

decision of shifting to a new place, as the owner was looking forward to selling out his property. He could find one interested buyer and they underwent a deal. The owner beforehand informed me about his willingness in selling his home. The new home is an extremely nice place to live in. It is a big apartment for a single person with two bedrooms, a kitchen and a living area. Most amazing is the balcony with a small table and two chairs, where you can sit, relax and enjoy the panoramic vista of the city while having coffee. On top of these, it is

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fully furnished accommodation. It has been a while since we met. I was contemplating if you could find some time and take a visit to my new flat. I will prepare some sumptuous dinner, that we will relish on the balcony. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Regards Nishant Chawda

Submitted by Nishant Chawda on Wed Mar 24 2021

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7 paragraphs

189 words

8.50

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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