You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear Martin, Hope you are in the pink of your health. I am writing

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letter to apprise you, that I have shifted to a new home

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week. I had to take

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decision of shifting to a new place, as the owner was looking forward to selling out his property. He could find one interested buyer and they underwent a deal. The owner beforehand informed me about his willingness in selling his home. The new home is an extremely nice place to live in. It is a big apartment for a single person with two bedrooms, a kitchen and a living area. Most amazing is the balcony with a small table and two chairs, where you can sit, relax and enjoy the panoramic vista of the city while having coffee. On top of these, it is

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fully furnished accommodation. It has been a while since we met. I was contemplating if you could find some time and take a visit to my new flat. I will prepare some sumptuous dinner, that we will relish on the balcony. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Regards Nishant Chawda

Submitted by Nishant Chawda on Wed Mar 24 2021

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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