Governments give lots of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been spent better elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Art plays
paramount
role in our society. but many people believe that investing wealth Add an article
a paramount
on
creatives by Government is not good because, there are numerous factors Change preposition
in
such
as health care, education and many more, where fund
should be invested. Add an article
the fund
This
essay will argue why ministry should raise hands for the help of artists plus why should spend on other sectors.
First
of all, art galleries are indispensable to preserve our culture and tradition. And these places can just decorated
with the marvellous craft of creatives. So, the predominant reason to give Change the verb form
be decorated
financial
grant to experts is that they are imperative for the existence of our culture. Add an article
a financial
the financial
However
, these
sort of work become great tourist attractions. Correct determiner usage
this
For instance
, Indian
PM prepared a huge statue of Mahatma Gandhi in Delhi where he spent 200 Correct article usage
the Indian
crore
. Change to a plural noun
crores
This
is also
a piece of charm to attract foreigners.
On the other hand
, there are multitudinous sectors like medicines, study
which is vital for the progress of Add an article
a study
the study
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Government
have to finance Add an article
The government
on
these main projects because others are secondary.Add to it, Change preposition
apply
study
is Add an article
the study
a study
primary
need for today's society as well as hospitals are Add an article
the primary
a primary
also
essential. For example
, patient
would not go to any museum for treatment plus he Add an article
the patient
a patient
need
Change the verb form
needs
doctor
for medicines, not any craftsmen.
To conclude, our ministry should maintain balance in both criteria. According to me, Add an article
a doctor
government
have to pay more attention Add an article
the government
on
health centres and education centres and after that, they have to provide fund to art sectors.Change the preposition
to
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