Developments in science and technology have caused environmental problems. Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays an increasing number of people are concerned about ecological system damage and it's protection method. weather should we act from the individual perspective or leave it to the ongoing scientific development caused by the hot debate online. I agree with the view that if we endeavour from not only individual aspect but
also
with the support of high-techs we might achieve our result quicker.
Firstly
, individual can devote a great effort on Environmental Protection in numeric methods .it is obvious that people who practice minimalism we purchase fewer items
such
as unnecessary clothes and furniture. if we all follow these approaches, there will be less demanding for the company or factory to manufacture and less pollution will be made.
Moreover
, if everyone is promoting an
environmental
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friendly lifestyle,
for example
, use reuse water bottle.
as a result
, there will be less plastic, disposal, non-biodegradable water bottle,
hence
will create less garbage which needs to be classified.
this
might
also
boost factory to design and produce equal friendly and nice quality products since those are what people need at present. from the environment and society aspects, the support from
technology
and science are significant.
this
means that the pollution was the consequences of Savage development on natural resource. when a human being does not have the necessary knowledge and skills about extracting natural resource. the situation is changing due to the advanced
technology
we can drill the traditional energy like petrol in an effective and eco-friendly way. ,
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the government are continuously investing in the
technology
of renewable energies like solar and wind as well as green energy transportation like electronic vehicles or hydrogen buses to help balance and control the exhaustion。 in sum, both individual and
technology
can be effective which comes to Environmental Protection as long as we share the same ultimate goal which is keeping our planet sustainable for our
next
generation.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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