It is suggested that all young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work, helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the young people?

‘

Community’

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Community

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refers to a group of people living together in a particular area. It is believed by some that to serve

the

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society

, youngers should join some volunteer jobs.

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short essay will express full agreement with

this

view and will offer reasons for

this

position.

Although

,

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working as a ‘volunteer’ has some negative consequences, because of

utilization

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the utilization

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of spare time in serving

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society

, youngsters are not able to manage their daily schedule,

consequently

, there might be detrimental effects on their own academic results. It seems undeniable that unpaid work provides an opportunity

to

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individuals to explore more about

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society

.

Additionally

, they become more aware

about

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of

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the necessities of the surrounding atmosphere

such

as health needs, trash disposals and many others and,

also

implements their skills to improve it. Well-organized campaigns are formulated to explore

society

’s needs and to accomplish them. To exemplify, in one school

of

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in

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Mississauga, students start

cleaning

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a cleaning

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program, the vision

of

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this

program is to clean

the

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public places on the weekends. Another benefit is that it thrives the professional career of the individual who works without cash.

Such

work not only

devise

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motivational skills

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but

also

helps to improve their practical skills, as working in a

society

is more practical.

Moreover

, when

any

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an

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individual seeks

job

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a job

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,

volunteer

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a volunteer

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record makes it more feasible.

For Instance

,

recruiter

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a recruiter

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hiring for a Personal support worker job, give more preference to the employee with some volunteer work. To sum up, youngers would likely to

be get

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some benefits by working in a charity foundation, as

this

boosts their intellectual and professional abilities

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unless it is under sufficient time period without having

impact

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an impact

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on their personal results.