Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. Do you agree with this statement.

The significance of reading
books
cannot
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by any society.
However
, the invention of
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television
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some hurdles. It
is often argue
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that the improvement in vocabulary plus in imagination is only possible with the help of reading
books
, not with watching television channels. I am totally agreed with
this
perspective.
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essay will argue why
books
play
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role in advancing our language and imagination skills.
To begin
with, the predominant benefit of reading is that it helps to improve the personality of any person. When
individual
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adopts
this
habit, he starts to imagine things in real life
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are written in
book
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the book
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. While
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reading novels and about multitudinous characters enhance his imagination power in various ways.
For instance
, when children begin reading about noble stories,
then
he tries to do
that
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customs in his daily life. As
its
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consequence, he became sharp and active.
Furthermore
,
this
kind of habits
work
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as a blessing in the learning of numerous sort of vocabulary. It is obvious that every book has storage of oodle of words and a reader have able to get
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of these words to understand the whole book. In
this
way, reading is indispensable to get new words.
For example
,
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newspaper survey showed that people who read more
books
get more marks in writing because they have knowledge of wide vocabulary than
who
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those who
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watch some language channels on television. To conclude, it's undeniable that the invention of the t.v is crackerjack but the merits of reading
books
are not overshadowed by its some positive points. And I think
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books
are that kind of instrument who aid in various ways.
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