You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -give details of your study plans -explain why you want to get a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear John, I hope you are in the pink of your health. I'

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glad to apprise you that I'

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able to secure admission to Houston University to pursue a Masters Degree.

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, I seek your assistance in finding a part-time job.

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is a full-time two years course and will commence in a fortnight. Fortunately, the classes will be conducted in the morning from 7 AM to 1 PM, so in the latter part of the day, I can take up another assignment. There are a couple of reasons for working part-time.

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, I am paying a premium fee as I'

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enrolled through Management Quota because of which I have applied for an education loan.

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, the bank declined to cover my housing expenses. So, in order to overcome these

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with no option to work part-time. I'

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aware that you are currently working with a reputed recruitment agency and can let me know if you have any suitable position to work in the evening.

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, if you can refer me for Supermarket supervisor, which was your previous job. Wish me luck and will meet you in person

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couple of weeks. Regards, Prateek.

Nishant Chawda

Mar 26, 2021

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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