Some people think that staying in hotels is not a good option to know about a country or its people. What do you think about this viewpoint?
Some
people
opine that tourists
cannot learn much about a country
while staying in a hotel
. I strongly agree with this
viewpoint because to understand the culture
it is better to stay with the local people
and better learning of local foods and languages is not possible in hotels
.
Firstly
, better
way to learn about a Correct article usage
a better
country
is to learn
the Verify preposition usage
aboutlearn
culture
of the nation. This
culture
can be learnt by staying with the local people
. In hotels
, local people
will not stay. There
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tourists
will find other travellers from different countries. From them they cannont
learn about the local Correct your spelling
can not
cannot
country
; nevertheless
, if they stay in countryside
, they will learn about local rituals and festivals. Add an article
the countryside
For instance
, in Indian hotels
it is very rare that a local person will stay so Add a comma
,hotels
tourists
cannot learn about culture
while staying in hotels
.
Secondly
, hotels
do not provide the
authentic local dishes and Correct article usage
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hotel's
staff Correct article usage
the hotel's
donot
talk in Correct your spelling
do not
don't
local
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the local
language
. Food and language
helps
to understand a Change the verb form
help
country
. If tourists
stay with the local people
, they will try the different flavours of the country
. They will listen
their local Add the preposition
tolisten
language
, eventually
start understanding Add a comma
,eventually
this
. Understanding a language
and tasting the local cuisine are
the best way to understand a nation. Change the verb form
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the hotel
a hotel
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,hotel
this
local cuisine is not available.
In conclusion, staying in hotel
does not teach Add an article
a hotel
the
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apply
tourists
about the real culture
of nations. In my perspectives, the best way is to stay with local people
understand the language
and eat local food prepared by the local people
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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