Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists.To what extent do you agree?
Some believe that
,
scientists and technology experts are given greater value in Remove the comma
apply
contemporary
era than musicians and artists. I totally disagree with Correct article usage
the contemporary
this
,mainly because musicians and artists are the most influential and richest Linking Words
people
in the Use synonyms
world
.
Use synonyms
To begin
with, professionals from the arts are very famous and popular individuals. Linking Words
In other
Linking Words
words
these Add a comma
,words
people
are loved and emulated by society. Use synonyms
For example
, Lady Gaga sang Linking Words
Correct article usage
the Americas
Americas
national anthem Change to a genitive case
America's
on
the Change preposition
at
inaugration
of Correct your spelling
inauguration
president
Joe Biden,recently. Change the capitalization
President
This
was a great move Linking Words
which
entertained and touched the hearts of many since she is an idol. They are Correct pronoun usage
that
also
role models to a lot of Linking Words
people
who want to imitate their lifestyle Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
type
of dressing. Correct article usage
the type
Therefore
these professionals entertain the Linking Words
world
and are of great importance.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, individuals are willing to pay a lot of money to see these icons perform or to join their exhibition.Linking Words
Such
has shown how much credit they are given. Going to Beyonce's show ,Linking Words
for instance
, costs a lot of money but Linking Words
this
does not deter fans from attending, because of the love they have for her. By Linking Words
Linking Words
this
musicians and artists have become one of the richest group Change the determiner
these
people
in every society, Use synonyms
such
that they own the most beautiful houses, travel around the Linking Words
world
and wear the most expensive clothes and Use synonyms
jewellary
. Correct your spelling
jewellery
This
is all because of the value that individuals place in them.
To sum up, despite science and technology being essential in today's Linking Words
world
, entertainment is still needed Use synonyms
thus
why singers and Linking Words
perfomers
are highly appreciated. Correct your spelling
performers
This
is clearly shown by their lifestyle and Linking Words
influence
they have in many societies.Correct article usage
the influence
Submitted by maereseratariro on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.