The older generations tend to have very traditional idea about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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When it comes to how someone is expected to live, think and conduct himself,
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from older
generations
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have a very traditional idea about it.
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, some
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think that to prepare younger
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for modern life, these
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are not helpful. I absolutely agree with the latter statement as new
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are not attached to the past timeframe and more efficient in solving emerging issues.
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, new approaches and
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are designed to make the lives of ordinary
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easier and simpler.
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, they offer more options and effective tools to solve day-to-day problems. By using them everyone can focus on more important and critical things to reach higher achievements in life.
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, nowadays, there is no need in cooking at home,
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, the necessary food can be ordered and it will be delivered saving a great amount of valuable time.
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, old
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were only efficient in the past and most of them can be seen as outdated. Even though old
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are time-proven, it does not mean that they cannot be optimized or improved. Sticking to an old mindset means ignoring progress and neglecting all the opportunities presented by the world. A prime example would old
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. There
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a fraction of old
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who do not know how to use personal computers. Not only do they not want to use modern technologies but they
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persuade others not to use them. In conclusion, very traditional
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, which usually come from older
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, about
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's life, behaviour, etcetera are not as efficient as newer ones in terms of preparing the representatives of younger
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for the modern world.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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