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In some countries, it is possible for people to have a variety of food that has been transported from all over the world. To what extent do you think its benefits outweigh the drawbacks?

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In
this
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 modern era Importing and exporting
food
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products
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 are super easy all over the world.
This
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 will lift the socio-economic level of the
country
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.In my point of view, the process of
food
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 transportations would provide many advantages than disadvantages.
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 shadow the demerits.
To begin
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 with,
firstly
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 transporting fruits and vegetables from one
country
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 to another
country
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 will absolutely increase the employment status of the nation.
Moreover
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,
people
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 can taste all the exotic
food
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products
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 from all over the world.
For instance
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,in the past ,days kiwi
fruit
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 was rarely seen in Indian
fruit
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 markets,because of
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 crop from Newzeland.
However
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,at present days kiwi
fruit
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 is widely available in all the
fruit
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 stall including the countryside.
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 is a drastic change that
happend
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happened
happens
 because of
food
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 transportation.
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 to that,the economical level of the
country
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 will rise,farmers can make a profit from international consumers.
People
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 will start to deal with world-class companies.Definitely,it will change the outlook of the nation.
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,some
people
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 are negatively thinking about importing
food
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 items.So far no countries have been banned any
food
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 item due to any toxicity.All the importing
products
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 certified with high-quality tests unless
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 those
products
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 are not allowed to transport.
This
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 will help all
people
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 can eat all their traditional way of
food
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 items from anywhere.
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,many Asians have settled in America,
although
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 they are far from their home
country
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,they are able to eat all their basic
food
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 items.
This
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 is a great advantage
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transporting facility. To conclude,In my perspective
people
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 should be more encouraged to import and export
food
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products
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 everywhere.
This
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 does not only help
people
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 to eat tasty
food
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moreover
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, but it will
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 help to improve the wealth of both individual and
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.The poor countries can develop their quality of life with their simple crops.
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