Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, environmental condition is a huge concern globally. It is believed by some people that

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could be solved at

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forum

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other

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that

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detrimental effect should be resolved

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nationwide. I believe that major causes of environmental

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can

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by global leaders and minor causes by the authorities at the national level. First of all,

contributing

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factor to environmental

condition

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conditions

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is global

warning

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warming

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, various diseases

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climate

concern

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occur owing to

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the detrimental

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effects of

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. One clear example,

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India, well known in the field of agriculture, has been dropping production of crops

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10 years

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soil erosion which

happen

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due to

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deforestation.

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economy

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showed pitfalls because of

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export

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exports

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, local bodies should reduce

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by imposing strict rules and regulations. Recently,

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the United

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nation,

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the global

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head of

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the environmental

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crisis management team, has allocated

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budget to control problems related to

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the environment

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construct

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constructing

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a bridge without

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forests area

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forest areas

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and

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many other concerns.

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, there are

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major problems

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towns and cities which could

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by either local municipal or administration

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departments

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. Currently,

construction

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the construction

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of buildings and

establishment

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the establishment

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of new factories creating

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problem which directly imbalance our environment.

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, people migrate towards metro

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cities

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for their better jobs and, for higher studies

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then

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they require accommodation and builders

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vanish plants and make flat land for horizontal or vertical apartments.

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, drainage

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should

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responsible for acute diseases like Malaria, Dengue which is

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effect

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affect

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environment

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the environment

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. In conclusion, major environmental problems,

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as global

warning

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warming

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could only be

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handled

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by Senior leaders on

global

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the global

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platform

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local bodies would resolve minor concerns like drainage , permission for construction and industry.

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task response

Provide a more balanced argument by giving equal weight to both sides of the issue.

coherence cohesion

Work on providing a stronger and clearer introduction and conclusion to the essay.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

295 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

international cooperation
sovereign rights
Paris Agreement
climate change
ocean pollution
collective measures
economic interests
political will
enforcement issues
free-riders
tailor-made solutions
transboundary pollution
resource constraints
global frameworks
national efforts

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