The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays,
people
know very well that smoking is dangerous ,
however
, many of them are not able to leave
this
habit
. The following essay will give a
detail
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explanation of the causes behind the
habit
as well as provide various ways to reduce smoking in society.
To begin
with,there are numerous causes of why
people
continue with the
habit
of smoking.
Firstly
,
people
are worried about their social status, especially, youngsters and the main reason is peer pressure.
For example
, if a young adult
do
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does
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not have any smoking
habit
but in his
group
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everyone is smoking,
then
he will
also
smoke because he wants to increase his social status.
Secondly
, most of the public have started smoking as nowadays, there is an increase in the level of stress. To illustrate, if a person is financially weak and he is not getting a job to
fulfill
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family's
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his family's
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needs , he will start smoking due to that pressure.
On the other hand
, there are various ways through which we reduce smoking in the community.I believe that doctors can conduct seminars so that they can spread awareness related to smoking.
For instance
, they can conduct seminars by which they can explain the side effects of smoking
such
as diseases
which
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that
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are caused due to smoking like lung cancer.
In addition
to that, the government should impose some amount of tax when
people
below 18 years are developing the
habit
and by doing that smoking can get eradicated from society. To conclude,
although
it not easy to reduce the
habit
of smoking ,the government and doctors can find out various ways by which we can reduce the
habit
of smoking to some extent and that can be done by spreading awareness and imposing some amount of taxes.
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