It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that the authority pours much money into protecting

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. In my opinion, the government could allocate their budget to other important sectors.

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, it is vital that education should be invested in difficult areas in the developing country.

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is because the children living in disadvantaged places are hard to reach

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schools, especially ethnic minority students,

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the rate of illiteracy has risen dramatically over the years. The government should offer free learning programs to them to have a better chance of attending schools that

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offer students raise awareness about protecting

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in the long run.

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, if children are not educated, they will not have sufficient knowledge about

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conservation, even they can kill or harm innocent animals. I believe that issues of life

pollution

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affect both humans and

wildlife

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. If the officials increase their spending on it, it will be more fruitful for both.

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, people cut down the trees to expand the land, infrastructure facilities and factories were built by deforestation could threaten the

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habitat, even lead to the extinction of some species.

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, cities are facing air

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because of increasing traffic and population. So the government should focus more on

pollution

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rather than

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. In conclusion, it is my firm belief that the state should spend more money on improving education and reducing

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rather than

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. At the same time, protecting

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habitat could be enhanced in the future.