You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter • give details of your visit to the restaurant • explain the reason for the celebration • say what was good about the food and the service Write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to review regarding your
restaurant
services and the food, which I ate yesterday. I went to your
restaurant
with my cousin and friends. The reason for visiting your
restaurant
was an engagement between my friend and my cousin, who arranged all the seats and selected the special dishes from the menu. I liked the cakes in the snacks, and the rice curry in the lunch, but the dessert of the Oreo cream was so amazing.
Moreover
, the waiters served everyone very respectfully, they welcomed the guests with a smile on their faces. All the tables and restrooms were neat and clean,
lastly
, we did not get into trouble during car parking. We are looking to revisit your
restaurant
. I hope the quality of your service will remain the same. yours faithfully John smith
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logical structure
You could further improve the logical structure by giving additional details on how the rest of the celebration unfolded to make the letter more engaging.
suitable writing tone
Keep the tone polite and grateful, which suits this kind of feedback; avoiding the use of 'review' can make it warmer.
greeting and closing
The letter has a clear greeting and closing, which shows politeness and structure.
complete response
You provided a complete response by mentioning all required details: the visit, the reason for the celebration, and what you liked about the food and service.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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  • thank
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  • recommend
  • celebration
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