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Many Teenagers now have their own smartphone. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion

#teenagers #smartphone
Since the dawn of
electronic
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 gadgets' era, more and more individuals have been obtaining
smartphones
 for various purposes. Whilst
smartphones
 are considered to be advantageous, they have some negatives causes. From my point of view, youngsters should limit their daily contribution of
phones
. On the one hand, having mobile
phones
of
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 young adults has its own positive aspects.
First
 and foremost, if
children
 own
smartphones
, so parents do not need to worry about their progenies' safety. There are plenty of applications
which
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 provide with
location
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the location
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 of
phone
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the phone
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 owner.
Hence
, while families cannot reach
to
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offsprings, they are able to follow their location by phone navigator
,
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 and help
children
 if they are in a dangerous situation.
Secondly
, due to
variety
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 of apps in
app
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the app
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 store or play market, teenagers may download some cognitive ones and broaden their
horizones
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horizons
horizon
. To illustrate, by acquiring
language
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 app people can learn any foreign language they wish and use it in the future.
On the other hand
, having mobile
phones
of
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 adolescents has certain negative sides.
Initially
, these days the prices of electronic gadgets cost a fortune what is not affordable to many families.
Subsequently
, some parents are taking a loan in order to buy a phone
to
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 their
children
, which can impact
income
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 of families.
Furthermore
, there is a general consensus that excessive use of
smartphones
affect
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on
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entire health.
Thus
, teenagers should confine their time of utilizing the
phones
, so that would be beneficial to avoid any detriments. To recapitulate, in spite of certain demerits that
phones
 have, the merits
also
 are very imperative on
children
's life. I hold the view that it would be
idealy
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ideal
ideally
 if every child own smartphone,
however
, they should limit the time dedicating to devices.
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