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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, the opinion that study of
literature
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, namely novels and poems, is not necessarily for teenagers. People claim that learning
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 should no longer be a key for high school. In
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 of all, some students
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 connect their life with different aspects of art. As an example, they decide to be the authors of
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, producers, directors or artists. Reading different
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 concentrates knowledge of art language and culture.
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, people form their own art foundation based on
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. Emotional background is
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 important aspect for each person. Erudition, in
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 vein, might help in university and career development.
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, learning
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 as awareness of
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 mentality of
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' characters and human gesture.
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, Dostoevsky, the master of
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 Russian
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, concentrated on human
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 and explored human's meaning. Each
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 novel describes human nature in different situations of life.
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, analysis of
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 might be useful concerning consumers in others job areas.
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,
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 who would like to work in
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 knowledge will be helpful.
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,
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literature
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 is
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 even in computer science because all professional relationships are based on understanding
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. In conclusion, the benefits of learning
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 in high school are more constructive than disadvantages.
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,
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studying
 reading
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 increase the erudition, in
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 way person's vocabulary, and awareness of human nature and
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,
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 aspect of education is useful for all students.
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