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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, the opinion that study of
literature
, namely novels and poems, is not necessarily for teenagers. People claim that learning
this
subject
 should no longer be a key for high school. In
this
 essay, I disagree with
this
 statement and support my opinion with
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examples.
First
 of all, some students
want
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towant
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 connect their life with different aspects of art. As an example, they decide to be the authors of
books
, producers, directors or artists. Reading different
books
 concentrates knowledge of art language and culture.
Furthermore
, people form their own art foundation based on
studied
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. Emotional background is
very
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 important aspect for each person. Erudition, in
this
 vein, might help in university and career development.
Secondly
, learning
literature
 is positive in
such
point
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 as awareness of
psychology
.
Understanding
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 mentality of
books
' characters and human gesture.
For instance
, Dostoevsky, the master of
19th century
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 Russian
literature
, concentrated on human
psychology
 and explored human's meaning. Each
his
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 novel describes human nature in different situations of life.
Therefore
, analysis of
this
subject
 might be useful concerning consumers in others job areas.
Accordingly
,
students
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for students
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 who would like to work in
such
 spheres as
business
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a business
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this
 knowledge will be helpful.
Moreover
,
the
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literature
 is
important
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an important
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subject
 even in computer science because all professional relationships are based on understanding
psychology
. In conclusion, the benefits of learning
literature
 as
subject
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a subject
the subject
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 in high school are more constructive than disadvantages.
Accordingly
,
studeing
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studying
 reading
books
 increase the erudition, in
this
 way person's vocabulary, and awareness of human nature and
psychology
.
Therefore
,
this
 aspect of education is useful for all students.
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