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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Other thinks it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views

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Education is crucial in our present society,there is a wide range of debate going on regarding the opinion
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 be taken from the learners and the other group of people opposing
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 idea.
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 essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantage of
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 topic. On the one hand,commenting regarding the teaching session will be helpful for teachers to understand the ability of the child.Because every child is not capable to catch what the
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 is being taught them.Some kids are just listening only at the end they would not able to attain the score in the exams.
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,there was a group of
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 were attended the classes,when they did not clear about the topic right after they clarified about the content with their
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 and she explained it in an
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 way eventually all the
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 through about the classes,later they got the best score in their examinations.
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 will help to build an intelligent and productive future generation in the community.
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,there are numerous kids who are there taking
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 as an advantage over the
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.Some
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 do harassment of asking the unnecessary question,even some
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 try to invade the personal lives of teachers.,
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,irrespective
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 of talking and abusing languages in the classrooms will make an unhappy situation for both learners and tutors.There should be a divine relationship should be carried out in the classrooms.,
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 teachers deserve to get respect.There is talk in the
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 language which is matha,pitha,guru,daivam.In
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 ,quote the presence of the
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 is coming before God. To conclude,to be a good
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, he or she has to understand the psychology of
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 as wells as the
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 should give immense respect to tutors.
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 relation will keep the effective learning process in academic institutions.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • constructive criticism
  • classroom discipline
  • educational quality
  • teaching methods
  • learning outcomes
  • classroom management
  • teacher-student relationship
  • collaborative
  • real-world communication
  • professional growth
  • hierarchy
  • formal barrier
  • structured feedback mechanisms
  • anonymous surveys
  • moderated discussions
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