Art is considered as an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?

Many societies attach importance to their artworks because it is believed that

art

reflects culture.We can see that many countries have some special masterpieces which

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originated from past years.

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of the opinion that

children

should be informed about

art

, but the balance of focusing

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art

and school lessons should be provided by them. It is truly evident that

art

enables

children

to express their thoughts and feelings easily.

This

is because it is easier to put forward thoughts in

art

. To exemplify, many psychologists use the method of painting for their

children

patients because many of them can express what they feel in paint without any force.

Therefore

, many

children

’ problems in

this

area can be tackled by psychologists.Another thing is that

art

alleviates the stress level because it requires creativity like painting , and it would

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colors

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.

Therefore

, thanks to using creativity, their mood level will increase positively.

On the other hand

, despite having abundant opportunities

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directing

children

to learn

art

, they would pay equal attention

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academic and

art

forms.

This

is because two of them are necessary to their future job life.That’s why it is obvious that creativity and viewpoint are gained by

art

because it aids them to express their ideas.

Besides

, theoretical

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are taught by school lessons ,and

also

these are obligatory for entering university.

For instance

, when we think

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architect,

this

person can not handle her or his projects without knowledge and viewpoint. If one of them is missing in business , customer satisfaction can not be obtained. To sum up,

art

has a good massive impact on

children

because it

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them to explain their ideas , and it reduces stress.

However

, attaching importance to both

art

and academic life should be balanced because of business life. Parents should strive to keep

this

balance.