Many people believe that it's better to learn something in group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that it's better
learning
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something in
groups
than individually. While some
people
believe socializing is the main way of exchanging knowledge, others argue that an individual process of matching theoretical information and your own analytical understanding is the principal way of learning. I completely agree with the
first
statement and I will discuss and support my view with examples in
this
essay.
Firstly
, when individuals are in a
group
it is possible to mix a variety of points of view about a theme, combining different and complementary realities and being profound on what is shared in the
group
.
This
is because
people
prefer to attend a school rather than
study
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by themselves on
a
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homeschooling. Being in a
group
improves the quality and the variety of
ideias
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ideas
about an issue, turning possible new perspectives, learning with others from the
group
and deepening knowledge.
For example
, academic studies are, most of
times
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, done by
groups
of specialized professionals, making it possible to discuss different ideas and driving to one solution with all
people
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agrement
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. Most
of
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discovery is done by
groups
rather than individuals studies and
this
shows how important
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humans is to share things in the process of learning.
As a
result
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is visible the tendency to reach better results by learning in
groups
than individuals.
On the other hand
, is important to maintain the role of schools for
people
who are self-educated, introverted and less comfortable talking in public. In an academic environment, they are pressured to make efforts and discuss in
group
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their point of view. The campus is the most important way
of
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students
learn
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how
learning
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and sharing ideas, if
this
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institutions achieve
this
goal, all the community around can benefit from it. One example, countries where academic institutions work hard on helping students to achieve a great baseline of sharing their knowledge, they are outliers on
worldwide
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ranking of best grades.
As a result
, these countries are more efficient in returning greater benefits to the local community,
such
as pioneer researchers and new technologies. In conclusion, it is viewed that learning in
groups
is more beneficial than individually.
Although
there are ways to improve these benefits
such
as encouraging
people
, since youngers, to share their views and opinions and value school's environment, where they can practice it.
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Word Count

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Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaborative environment
  • discussion
  • debate
  • exchange of ideas
  • critical soft skills
  • communication
  • teamwork
  • leadership
  • emotional and motivational support
  • isolating
  • personalized pace
  • efficient learning
  • self-discipline
  • accountability
  • educational progress
  • distractions
  • group dynamics
  • commitment
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