Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your opinion??
It appears that the adverb easily is attempting to modify the noun availability. Consider replacing the adverb with an adjective.
The word availability doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
Oops! It appears that you typed also plays twice in a row. Consider deleting one of them.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.