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Cyber-bullying and cybercrimes are seen to be on the rise today. What are the causes for this? What are the solutions for this problem?

#cybercrimes #rise
In these modern days’ technology is on
boom
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the boom
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, along with
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 we can
also
 notice some disadvantages like
cyber bullying
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cyberbullying
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 and
cyber
-crime. I think
this
 is a bad sign for the safety and securities issues online. These problems must be controlled for the development and growth of
online
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the online
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 industry. The main causes of
cyber bullying
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cyberbullying
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 include revenge,
self judgement
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self-judgement
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 to punish the victim, contactless bullying and addiction to bullying. In most
of
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the
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cases the victims are usually known to the bullies, they often target
people
 who are weak or
people
 with whom they are having
problem
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a problem
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. As it is a process
from
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online, it is not easy to find out the bullies which is a major advantage for them to continue
such
 activities and consider themselves as
supreme
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 being. The solutions to these problems are
simple
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 just block or report unwanted comments, keep a record of
such
 data in your computer for future use, do not reply to unknown messages, do not argue or converse with unknown
people
. And complain to government
cyber security
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cybersecurity
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 websites if any
such
 issues are faced.
Cyber
 Crime is a major problem faced by many
people
 online.
Main
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 causes are easy
access
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, complex coding, negligence and loss of evidence. These causes lead to hacking, stealing sensitive information, unauthorized surveillance, blackmailing, forcing victims to indulge in other
crimes
 etc. All these problems can be avoided
safeguarding
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 your devices with
latest
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 software, strong passwords, control settings, be aware of thefts and report if you are a victim so that necessary steps can be taken to solve the problem. To conclude, one must be well aware
about
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 the types of
crimes
 and efficient way to handle situations to defend
crimes
 against them. The more alert we are about the
crimes
 online, the less is the chance to fall
in
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 a trap.
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