Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
ome
are on the view that extra effort and concern is diverted to save wild animals and birds. I totally disagree with the above fact that extra effort is been put rather less investment and action is been taken by people at present.
Deforestation is happening at an alarming rate worldwide impacting the lifecycle of wildlife. Correct your spelling
some
To begin
with, natural habitat and the breeding grounds of species are getting decreased by selfless acts by corporates for housing and construction. For an
example, the Correct article usage
apply
world
saw the last
white African Rhino losing its life due to the loss of natural space for it to live in. In addition
to this
,the Amazon forest which is considered to be the largest rain forest in the world
lost 10 % of its trees in the last
2 years which has caused many endangered species to vanish from this
planet.
On the other hand
poaching and, hunting animals have been on the rise over the
recent years. Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, some countries, such
as Japan have given government sponsorship to conduct mass killings of whales as a sport .Furthermore
, paching
which is considered to be one of the Correct your spelling
patching
poaching
packing
billion- dollar
businesses in the Add a hyphen
billion-dollar
world
has pave
the way without any restriction or action to kill animals to be sold at Change the form of the verb
paved
open
market. Add an article
the open
an open
Finally
, these kinds of actions without any restrictions will result in the extinction of wildlife to the world
very quickly.
In conclusion, it is clear that even if some people believe that extra effort and investment is been put in to save wildlife and birds, the truth of the matter is that it's the quite opposite which is happening and urgent attention is needed to solve this
complex issue.Submitted by suhithakarunanayake on
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