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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The shortage of
food
 is one of the most important issues nowadays; some people think genetically modified
foods
 are
plausible
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 solution. It is indisputable that the
resources
 of
food
are now become
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now become
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 scarce; thereby, the
advance
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 technology brings
the
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GMO
food
 to solve
this
problem
.
However
, I believed that
the
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organic
food
 is the best for human health.
In
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To
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 some extent of the
problem
, human beings are omnivores because people eat plants, cooked meats and fish. According to the overpopulation of human, there are overwhelmed of
food
 companies that hunting the natural
food
resources
.
Moreover
,
the
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environmental issues
such
 as global warming and
water
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water-scarce
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scarce
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scarcity
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also
 affect the agriculture system; it can
reduces
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 the quality of crops and causes disease in farm animals.
Therefore
, there are many technologies in
food
resources
 that will improve the quality of diets, particularly in genetically modified
foods
.
On the other hand
, an investigation shows that consumption of these genetically engineered
foods
 can cause the development of diseases
which
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that
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 are immune to antibiotics. Aside from the biological concern, there is an economic one,
these GMO
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this GMO food cost
these GMO food costs
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food
 cost extravagant and most
of
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apply
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people
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the people
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 cannot afford
it
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them
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.
Thus
, organic
foods
 are cheaper and healthier than GMO
foods
. In conclusion, I disagreed that
the
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genetically modified
food
 is a sustainable solution
for
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to
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this
problem
. I think there are other ways to solve
this
problem
. I think that it should be the responsibility of everyone to sustain our environment and be conscious about the consumption of
the
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natural
food
resources
.
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