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Advancement in transportation has enabled people to travel extensively. Does travel helps to promote understanding and communication between two countries?

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A new way of travelling system has become beneficial for individuals. I believe that journey gives the chance to the masses to meet with other nation's
people
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 essay will substantiate my perspective in the following paragraphs with appropriate examples. To commence with, an advanced type of transportation makes
people
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's
travel
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 easier than past.
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, individuals visit other places for various purposes
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 as
business
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 meeting, wedding or parties, for study and as a visitor. In
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 way, they meet with other
countries
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people
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 and make contact with them.
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, tourists who
travel
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 to other
nations
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 to experience different cultures religions, lifestyle and collect knowledge about that, which make some type of connection with
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, visitors share their experiences with their own
people
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 and promote other
nations
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 in their country.
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,
business
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 and education field
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 play a vital role to
travel
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 and promote good communication between two
countries
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. Lots of
business
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 tycoons visit other
nations
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 related to their
business
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 meetings.
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, Ambani is the number one and richest businessman in India but he
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 settled their
business
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 in foreign
countries
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 and
this
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business
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 link generates proper comprehension and communication between other
nations
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.
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, overseas education gives chance to students
travel
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 to other
nations
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 regarding their higher education. If students enrol for their study in abroad universities or colleges
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 they can learn and adventure new experiences from that place as well as they can promote their own culture too. To summarize, travelling is one of the essential parts to bring two different
countries
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 together and it can become a reason for a good relationship and bonding between them.
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, it is
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 possible to contribute to each other problems and solutions which can build strong interaction.

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