You live near a university and would like to earn some extra money by renting a room in your apartment to a student. Write a letter to the university housing office.
Dear sir or madam
I am living in a cottage near Boston University. I am the only one in
this
house because my parents went on holiday and they will come back home next year. So I have decided to request you a student.
My house's facilities are it is quite an area, in the house has good quality Wi-Fi and we use kitchen, bathroom, and living room together. And the home is near to the train station, if he wants to go somewhere it is easy for him. I don't ask him for much money, just enough for my daily needs.
In student's room has a laptop, a desk for studying, a shelf for clothes, a bed and his own toilet. I think these features are good for students.
Yours sincerely
YusufbekSubmitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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Your letter should include a proper introduction of who you are, the purpose of your letter, and a brief summary of the accommodation you're offering.
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Elaborate more on how the accommodation will benefit the student, including proximity to university facilities, local amenities, and transport links.
coherence and cohesion
Organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each covering a different point. One for your introduction and offer, another for the details of the accommodation, and a final one for your conclusion or call to action.
coherence and cohesion
Use a wider range of cohesive devices (e.g., furthermore, moreover, however) to link your ideas more clearly and show the relationship between them.
coherence and cohesion
Sign off your letter with an appropriate closing remark and your full name to make it look professional.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite