News Media is more influential nowadays and some people think it is a negative development. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
I believe that maintaining a
credit
card
feels secure to me. Nowadays technology has developed a lot. Most of
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people
prefer online transactions instead
of having hand cash because of two reasons for security purposes and for having offers.
Firstly
, the
theft cases are increasing day-by-day. So, Correct article usage
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people
are having a fear of maintaining cash in their pocket. At that time the government introduced a credit
card
policy, people
can apply for credit
cards in their own banks. Moreover
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people
can use the
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credit
card
in any public place like Shopping malls, restaurants, and grocery stores etc..
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people
don't panic about getting robbed because while we use the
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credit
card
we have to enter the four-digit passcode. Later only we can withdraw the amount
from our account. So, the public feels secured because of using credit
cards for their payments.
Secondly
, in our country
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people
were using hand cash only because they don't have much knowledge about recent trends. However
, the government should give awareness to them through campaigns or by advertising. For instance
, recently my uncle visited the shopping mall and he billed the amount
of 50,000 INR. Later while billing, he gets to know that if he pays the amount
through the credit
card
means they will provide a 25% discount to him.
To conclude, In my opinion, people
will be benefited if they prefer credit
cards for making payments. In the meantime, they can save some amount
through the offers which are provided by the bank. Also
, they don't have a fear of thefts.Submitted by sivahunk32 on
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