Q) Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid any change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, most

of

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the

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young people are showing interest

to do

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in doing

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different types of

works

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or activities in their daily

life

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.

However

, mostly, adults are sticking to one type of

work

only,

due to

some reasons. In my point of view, both views have their pros and cons.

Moreover

, they will be discussed in the below paragraphs.

Firstly

, in the present generation, most of the teenagers are thinking to explore themselves. So they are showing interest

to do

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different

kind

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of

works

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to gain some

experience

and knowledge.

For instance

, I am an extrovert person, I like to explore myself every moment. Everything in my

life

I will try to do it differently. Because of doing different types of

work

,

definitely

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we will gain some

experience

in that

work

.

While

in

this

process, we will get to know that, what to do and what not to do in our

life

.

Secondly

, of course, most of the adults believe that knowing one particular

work

,

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will give us more benefits in our

life

. Like getting promotions and it will help to gain a good name in society.

For instance

, my father is a government officer. From 1996 onwards, he is working in the same office as a public employer.

However

, in his career, he had 25 years of

experience

in the

bank

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sector.

While

in

this

process, he gained a lot of respect, money, and knowledge.

To conclude

, some people were sticking to only one particular

work

, to

gaining

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more

experience

.

while

some people thought that doing different kinds of

work

, will increase more knowledge about our society. In my opinion, by following both views in our

life

. We will

be benefited

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in our daily

life

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.