Q) Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid any change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, most
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young people are showing interest
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different types of
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or activities in their daily
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life
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, mostly, adults are sticking to one type of
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only,
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some reasons. In my point of view, both views have their pros and cons.
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, they will be discussed in the below paragraphs.
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, in the present generation, most of the teenagers are thinking to explore themselves. So they are showing interest
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different
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of
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to gain some
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and knowledge.
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, I am an extrovert person, I like to explore myself every moment. Everything in my
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I will try to do it differently. Because of doing different types of
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we will gain some
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in that
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in
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process, we will get to know that, what to do and what not to do in our
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, of course, most of the adults believe that knowing one particular
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will give us more benefits in our
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. Like getting promotions and it will help to gain a good name in society.
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, my father is a government officer. From 1996 onwards, he is working in the same office as a public employer.
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, in his career, he had 25 years of
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in the
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sector.
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process, he gained a lot of respect, money, and knowledge.
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, some people were sticking to only one particular
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, to
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more
experience
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some people thought that doing different kinds of
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, will increase more knowledge about our society. In my opinion, by following both views in our
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. We will
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in our daily
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life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comfort zone
  • Proficiency
  • Resistance
  • Stability
  • Monotony
  • Adaptability
  • Personal growth
  • Opportunities
  • Evolve
  • Self-awareness
  • Novel experiences
  • Stagnation
  • Routine
  • Disruptions
  • Fear of the unknown
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