You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my disappointment with several arrangements made by your staff during our management meeting recently. Our organization held the management meeting on 1st March 2021 from 8.30 am to 5.00 p.m at your hotel.

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, as per the feedback received by the majority of our staff members, they were extremely happy about the services rendered by your hotel.

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, many were utterly disappointed about the food that was served for lunch.

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is not only due to the limited variety of meals but

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because of the unpleasant smell and taste of them.

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, even though we had informed about the vegetarian employees no food was served for them.

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, I would like to propose a few recommendations to improve the quality of your food.

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, it is important to have a variety of main courses as it would help everyone to enjoy a great meal .

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, hire a professional chef so that a person of that calibre would maintain

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standards and taste of the meals. Your kind consideration in

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regard will be greatly appreciated. Yours faithfully, Madonna Samasundera

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