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QUESTION: There are many ways to find a job: newspaper advertisements, Internet job search Websites, and personal recommendations. What do you think is the best way to find a job? Give reasons or examples to support your opinion.

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In recent years, people can easily find company’s information through not only newspaper
advertisements
, personal recommendations but
also
 websites on the internet. As far as I am concerned, despite several useful methods to get a
job
, I opt for a
job
 which is found on Internet especially on social networks like Facebook and Instagram and I am going to make my statement clear in
this
 essay.
First
 of all, a
job
 found on the social network is usually suitable for an individual's interest. It is no doubt that social network is now known by the majority of the population in all around the world and plays an imperative part in everyone’s life.
Hence
,
advertisements
 relating to occupation on Facebook or Instagram not only easily approach applicants but
also
 casually base on the categories that interest users. To illustrate
this
, based on people’s searching on social networks
such
 as cooking or business, the
advertisements
 involving
this
 particular field will
consequently
 exist on their new feed.
Secondly
, Regarding specific sphere, without any difficulty, people can assess the enterprise through the content of their
advertisements
 or their page on Facebook or another social field with just one click. The reason is that if the content indicates sincerely the enterprise’s strength or their good potential, it is absolutely a great
job
 that applicants should take into account. To conclude,
Although
 there are a variety of novelty ways to find a
job
, from my point of view,
social
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the social
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 network has a significant strength compared to other methods.
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