Some people think that young children need to attend nursery before primary school. While others believe young children can spend all day at home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people favour that
children
should attend prep classes before joining Use synonyms
school
whilst others have a contrasting viewpoint. I believe prep classes help students to adopt the habit of staying away from homes for a few hours. Those who favour the statement that Use synonyms
children
should stay at home state that Use synonyms
children
are delicate at Use synonyms
this
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age
, it is better for them to be with family.
On one side, Use synonyms
children
are vulnerable at Use synonyms
this
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age
, they need their Use synonyms
parents
for basic things. They are not trained to use washrooms. They are not properly trained to eat their food. They have not developed of expressing things. Use synonyms
Parents
are able to understand their needs. They help them to eat and use washrooms; Use synonyms
nevertheless
, Linking Words
this
is not possible to be expected from the people who are not part of Linking Words
children
's family. Teachers of these primary Use synonyms
school
cannot nurture the Use synonyms
children
like Use synonyms
parents
which is necessary at Use synonyms
this
delicate Linking Words
age
. Use synonyms
For example
, most of the Linking Words
children
are not trained enough to eat without Use synonyms
help
of elders. Add an article
the help
Hence
, because Linking Words
children
are delicate at Use synonyms
this
, it is better if they stay at home.
On the other side, Linking Words
children
practice the habit of staying away from their Use synonyms
parents
in nursey. In Use synonyms
school
, Use synonyms
children
have to sit for Use synonyms
longer
hours. There they will not be Replace the word
long
be
family. Remove the redundancy
apply
Linking Words
Initially
they will miss their homes and families. They may not be able to focus on Add a comma
,Initially
studies
and their education. If they Correct pronoun usage
their studies
be
to Change the verb form
are
nursery
, they will imbibe the habit of sitting. Add an article
the nursery
a nursery
This
will help in practising how to stay from their family. Linking Words
For example
, in starting days of Linking Words
school
Use synonyms
children
who did not attend any classes before often cry and scream because they miss their family.
In conclusion, sending Use synonyms
children
to nursery prepare them for their Use synonyms
school
; Use synonyms
nevertheless
, they are not mature at Linking Words
this
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age
to be away from family. I believe they should be sent to nursery , Use synonyms
this
will help them in future studies.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite