CHILDREN SHOULD ALWAYS FOLLOW THEIR PARENTS’ ADVICE. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

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completelly

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completely

agree with those who consider that

children

should always follow their parents' advice. When

we

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born, we arrive naked

on

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this

world. No clothes, no concepts, no experience.

Defenseles

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Defenceless

as we can be. Creative, but without experience to deal with the complexities of

this

world.

To begin

with, differently

of

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most

of

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other

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beings in the animal

kingdon

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kingdom

, we live in a

a

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complex society that depends upon abstracts signs, rules and behaviours. To make things more challenging, our development is slow. It takes a lot of time, effort and mistakes are

commited

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committed

in our path to

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funcional

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functional

beings.

Therefore

, it is logical to let those who came before and conceived us

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guide

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until

untill

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we have at least some skills to deal with the

intrincacies

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intricacies

of

this

life.

Unfourtunatelly

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Unfortunately

nothing is perfect and there are situations in which following

parent's

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advice could not be the best thing to do.

For example

, some parents could be Ignorants

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or

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suffer

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disorders. Some of them could be perfectly normal and educated, but biased and egocentric. Or even outdated and

to

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proud to admit. In these cases, there will be limits to the

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extension

in

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which

children

should be guided by their

advises

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.

Nonetheless

, these are exceptions and should be

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dealt

death

with case by case. To conclude, I would like to highlight the fact the

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survival of our species depends upon on how of how efficient we are

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dealing with the

pecualirities

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peculiarities

of our society. The education of

children

is an endeavour that

envolves

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involves

both the public and the private. For the sake of

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efficient and functional development in the process of

children

preparation for living in communities is essential that parents receive all the available support and resources to provide for them. They should be respected by the sons and daughters and should provide for them the best advice and education.