Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion.

Nowadays education institutions are relying more than ever on electronic devices

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as computers to assist

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their

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. Some individuals believe that

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is a positive aspect

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because it offers the student the opportunity to

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from anywhere in the world. Others,

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, believe that not being in physical contact with the teacher or other

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will lead to negative consequences. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion way I think computers

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a vital device in educating

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. Some believe it is important to be physically present in the classroom because it

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’s social skills, which can be used when interacting with

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’s peers and co-workers in the work environment. In a recent

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in London, they viewed two groups of

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. The

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group

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was distance learning

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and the

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group

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of

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physically attended classes at the university. Both

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of

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completed the same course. The

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indicated that the

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group

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who attended lessons in a classroom environment climbed the cooperate ladder much quicker and ended up in senior positions

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because their social skills

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much better

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the

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of

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who studied from home.

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, and

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personal

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opinion

, being able to use your computer for studying purposes is a wonderful advantage, because it offers

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the opportunity to

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at a

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that is

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convenient for you. In

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day and

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a lot of people are working full

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and studying

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time

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.

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, being able to

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from home limits

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commute

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which

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can use on their studies. In conclusion, attending classes physically may lead to better communication and people skills which could boost

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career.

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, thanks to the internet and technology those who can not attend classes have the opportunity to

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online.