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For some people learning in a group is the most effective way.while other prefer one one-on-one instruction .disscusn both view .what is your opinion ?

#people #group #instruction #disscusn
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 to share their ideas and discuss
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 in brief. In my opinion, the best mode of learning is in
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 as
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 can develop critical thinking skills and gain more confidence to speak in public. Some
people
 think that they are myriads of factors that
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group
 study.
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 of most conspicuous factors from studying with three or
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. It will help to boost up
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confidence while speaking in
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public. There
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 of
people
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Besides
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every individual have new ideas and each of them
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 in
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 way by sharing their views with each other they can learn more frequently.
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number
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 of
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university
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 which assigned
group
 assignments to the students and working on the assignment they learn various things
such
 as cooperation, time management and sharing.
On the other hand
, some
people
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 that
face
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 discussion with teachers and feedback from them help the individuals to improve over their mistakes.
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, it will help them to find out where they are lacking
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and tutors will suggest the ways so that they can overcome the problems which they are facing during their studies. For instances, in India when students prepare
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 competitive exams they go for one-on-one discussion and
then
 their mentors provide them instructions in which they need corrections. In
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conclusion
,
although
 taking classes from
quailified
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qualified
 examiner provides the platform to the individual to give good
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performance in
performance
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 with
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 number of
people
 have more advantages because with that they can learn new things from others and get intellectually strong.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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