You work in an international compny. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter - explain why you need this time off - give details of when you want the time off - say who can do your work when you are away

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in case to let me have the holiday

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month. As I said before I need to go out in July due to my best friend's wedding. She lives far away from me, so it is

our

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good opportunity to see each other. Before I hadn't ever applied for vacation since I had been recruited for

this

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position in 2019. So

that is

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a long time and I have already shown myself as a hard-working person. Particularly I need to have my days off in

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second

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part of July from 16, July till 30, July. What is more, I would like to remind you that I had written these days in our calendar of holidays which we signed in December. No one from our team won't absent at

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time. I spoke to my colleague, whose name is Anna, and she politely agreed to do my work while I am on

holidays

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holiday

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. I promise to write the plan for her what she needs to do in these 2 weeks and

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I will try to finish some of my duties. I am looking forward to your email. Yours faithfully, Maria

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

199 words

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Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree that constantly increasing production is an appropriate goal?