You work in an international compny. You need to take some time off work. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter - explain why you need this time off - give details of when you want the time off - say who can do your work when you are away

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in case to let me have the holiday
month. As I said before I need to go out in July due to my best friend's wedding. She lives far away from me, so it is
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good opportunity to see each other. Before I hadn't ever applied for vacation since I had been recruited for
position in 2019. So
that is
a long time and I have already shown myself as a hard-working person. Particularly I need to have my days off in
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part of July from 16, July till 30, July. What is more, I would like to remind you that I had written these days in our calendar of holidays which we signed in December. No one from our team won't absent at
time. I spoke to my colleague, whose name is Anna, and she politely agreed to do my work while I am on
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. I promise to write the plan for her what she needs to do in these 2 weeks and
I will try to finish some of my duties. I am looking forward to your email. Yours faithfully, Maria
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