Shortage of Housing has given several social consequences. Only government can solve the problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Some
people
argue that the lack of houses has had a significant impact on society.
This
essay not only agrees with the argument but
also
believes that only
government
can solve
such
issues.
Firstly
,
this
essay illustrates the security problem and
secondly
, about the effect on youngsters.
To begin
,
with
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a common problem that homeless
people
face is the lack of security.
People
who have shelter have some sort of assurance to their belongings by storing things in lockers, secured cabins etc.
However
, the shelter-less folks cannot afford these and even if afforded, it is not protected as it is not under a roof. As a consequence,
this
promotes robbery and other crimes.
For example
, the
government
of Austria was able to identify
this
issue and started maintaining homes, dormitories and providing basic amenities for the homeless.
This
helped to overcome robbery compared to previous years.
Furthermore
, the homeless effect definitely has an impact on young minds and their behaviour.
Usually
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these
people
are so destitute that they do not have the essentials to live. It is believed that "Today's youngsters are tomorrow's adults who drive the nation".
Although
, there are exceptional cases where a poor man goes on to become a celebrity, practically it is one in a million scenario. For ,example the
government
of the US has some special homes and care centres for children where they are
also
educated and trained to be self-dependent. To conclude, security issues and impact on children are the by-products that a society has to deal with when the shelter-less population is significant. As it is a wider issue only
government
can solve
this
by taking necessary steps like sheltering the deprived and the needy community.
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